There are things I like about this fruity little piece, and there are things that make me cringey.
I will start with the cringe factor:
- The peach was way smaller than that, and the bananas were larger. Does this say something psychological about me? I don't know.
- I could have done a better job with the shadow. There was surely more of it than that on the table.
- The bowl did not actually have a blue rim, but I am just not that good at depicting the white edge of something. I need more practice.
- Instead of a bowl on a table, this may look like fruit in a little white bathtub, floating on a teal sea. If that is what you think, I am sorry. I apologize. There is a reason for this. The table was a boring pale brown and I am a color addict. So I changed the color of the table. And this bowl was in the middle of the table, not near the edge. I gave it a horizon. Hence, the appearance of the sea. So sue me. I love the colors.
- I am delighted with the spots on the bananas, and I think I captured the curve of them pretty well. The one in front had a little twist to it.
- I like the shadows in the bowl.
- I am happy with the colors in the peach, and the little spots along its seam.
All in all, I am happy with what I did with a pretty unappealing bowl of fruit: a hard peach and overripe bananas that I had no interest in eating.
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